Is it written correctly?

Question

Such a great news and a beautiful name! So many congratulations dear Marie and Johb on the arrival of the beautiful little angel Carol! :). Also a big congrats to her proud grandparents, uncle and aunt and to the whole family.

We wish all the best for you and your new little bundle of joy.

Answer 1

Such great news and what a beautiful name. Congratulations, Dear Marie and John on the arrival of your beautiful little angel Carol. Also, big Congrats to her proud Grandparents, Aunt, Uncle and to the whole family. We wish all the best for you and the new little bundle of joy..

Answer 2

Almost. "Such a great news and a beautiful name!" is not really correct.You may want to break it up a bit. "Such wonderful news to hear, and such a beautiful name!" Or something similar. Also, "So many congratulations dear Marie and Johb on the arrival of the beautiful little angel Carol!" It doesnt require "so many" this may be better "Congratulations dear Marie and John(b?) on the arrival of your beautiful little angel Carol" That's all I can see, hope that helps :)

Answer 3

Such great news and what a beautiful name too! Congratulations dear Marie and Johb on the arrival of your beautiful little angel Carol! :)

Also, a big congrats to her proud grandparents,uncle, aunt and to the rest of the family. We wish the best for all of you and your new little bundle of joy.

Answer 4

You don't need a period after the smiley face, since you've already used the exclamation mark to finish the sentence. And I would say "Such great news" instead of "such a great news" - the article doesn't make much sense. I would also put a comma after aunt - it's not necessary, but it cleans it up a bit. Also, I think his name might be John, not Johb, although, of course, I could be wrong.