Is m poem ok???

Question

Enough Is Enough

I've tried so many times to

help you change your ways.

Yet you always take advantage

of and never thank me.

I've spent so many nights

crying myself to sleep

over you even though

you don't care at all.

I'm sick and tired of

having feelings for you.

I've had enough of your

evil ways.

I'm leaving you behind

and never looking back.

I'm moving on without you

whether you like it or not

i wrote this while i was crying cause i'm tired of the way my ex bf treats me. sorry if it sucks

Answer 1

Wow, that was really good, im very sorry he treats you like that

Answer 2

I loved it! the wording could use a bit more work but otherwise it was heartfelt and i could really feel the emotion you put into this... lets just say i probably couldnt have done better than that lol it was really nice. Just remember that you cant let him push you around. youve got to stand up for yourself. A boyfriend should treat his girlfriend with respect and should take care of her not push her around. if i was you i would not go out with him anymore and look for someone that would treat me fairly. oh but i cant lol cause im a guy!

Answer 3

Pour out your heart and soul to me, luvie. You are in a time of need which knows no bounds. Keep on hating him, and keep on crying. Because in the end, you will come out of your room and live your life right. You will come out of your cocoon and emerge into a gorgeous butterfly. Soon, all will be well. Just keep on crying and you will see the way.

P.S. I am always there for you. I will always catch you if you fall.

Answer 4

Good although it's to sad.. But I guess that's the point of it.

Answer 5

Your poem is great.

You have the insight and strength to write like this, so you have the insight and strength to move on from this relationship, and be all the stronger for it.

YOU deserve better.

Answer 6

Wow! I can feel the emotion in your words! That was moving! Good luck- I know the right guy is out there!

Answer 7

ITZ GREAT!! just remember... if he treats you so badly you should talk to an adult or something.... also try ignoring him...

or you can confront him....

and just BE HAPPY =] srry if its a little too.... optamistic....

too many people are depressed in this world

Answer 8

it does not suck  at all. your better of without him. he just not worth crying over. cheer up

Answer 9

I like your poem and I think that it is good you finally left your ex bf but you shouldn't let a person that stupid make you sad. Cheer up :)

Answer 10

i TOTALLY luvv it!!! its real, emotional, and you can tell that you really are serious about stopping how he is.

plus it could even take on more than one meaning, an addict's gf who is trying to get him to stop for example

great job! =)

Answer 11

omg. thats really good!  i'm so sorry about your ex, i hope things start looking better for u. good luck

Answer 12

that is really good

i lyked it u can relate

:)

its good with the song

everything back but you-avril lavgine

kinda