Is my RESUME ok how can i improve it??

Question

Resume

Ella Duffy

Personal Details

Name: Ella Duffy

Date of birth: 17/8/1991

Age: 16

Address: 10 Bisdee Street South Arm 7022

Telephone: Home: [phone]

Mobile: [phone]

Availability to work: Friday 12:30 onwards, Wednesday 3.30 onwards weekends and public holidays.

Personal Statement

I am looking to gain employment in a casual or part time job,

And I am able to start work immediately. I am a friendly, honest, sociable, reliable and a hard working person who is willing and capable to help assist customers.

Education

I currently attend Rosny College this year I am studying 6 subjects.

1. Health Studies 5c

2. English 4c

3. Life Science (Biology) 4c

4. Tourism 4c

5. First Aid 2c

6. Cakes biscuits and confectionary 2c

When I finish school in 2009 I would hopefully like to have gain employment in the hospitality, fashion or nursing area.

Previous education:

Cottage School 1996-2000

South Arm Primary School 2001-2003

Rose Bay High School 2004-2007

Skills:

* High computer skills great knowledge with Microsoft Word, Excel, and PowerPoint, and Internet

* Great Communication skills

* First Aid certificate

* RSA ( responsible service of alcohol) certificate

* Ability to successfully communicate with all types of people

* Positive attitude

Achievements

* · 40 hour famine 2004-2007

* · Rose bay Achievement award 2007

* · Rose bay academic award 2006

* · Red cross regular blood donation giver

* Learners Driver’s Licence

Hobbies and interests

· Fashion

· Reading

· Socializing

· Dancing

· Traveling

· Camping

· Viewing films

· Music

· fitness

Answer 1

I don't know much about resume's and how to format them, but it sounds pretty good and it doesn't sound bad at all, it sounds like the business type.

Answer 2

i think you should get your personal details off the net.

This is not wise