Is my dad deck great????

Question

i have every thing but destiny draws

monsters

1xdad

1xdarklord zerato

1xdmoc

1xdestiny hero dasher

3xcyber valley

2xarmageddin knight

2xdark grepher

2xjinzo

2xd.d. survivor

1xspirit reaper

1xsangan

1xdestiny her disk commander

1xstrike ninja

1xprometheus, king of the shadows

spell

1xburial from a different dinension

2xreinforcement of the army

2xallure of darkness

1xpremature burial

1xgiant trunade

1xmst

1xmind control

1xbrain control

1x heavy

1xd.d.r.

1xlightning vortex

1xreborn

traps

1xmirror force

1xtorrential

1xreturn from the different dimension

1xroyal decree

1xcrush card

1xescape from the dark dinension

i am thinking of taking out 1 jinzo for 1 dark creator?

so what do you ppl think i should do?

Answer 1

2 more dads would be nice and a ccv would to but its not bad 7 out of 10

Answer 2

Um.. no not great, good, but not great. Dump 1 Jinzo, 1 mind control, 1 lightning, 1 Royal decree, 1 Gepher and Trunade. Add 2 DAD, 1 Trade in, 1 Escape, 1 DDR and 1 Armageddon Knight. I use DAD return deck too and this will work much better, it will be faster and with DAD and Zerato, Lightning Vortex really isnt needed. This deck with CCV has all the destruction you need.