Is my dance good?

Question

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XTs2JDQz1fQ

I have no space in the place where I taped it, but you can get the "jist" of the choreography from what I did. It gets better around :56 , 1:20, and 2:13 to the end.

Haha my leaps and kicks are unimpressive but I promise with more space I can kick to my head. And when I go down on the floor, it's a split, you just can't see =]

Answer 1

In most of the dance your arm lines were not the best.  You shouldn 't break the lines by bend you wrists. Also make sure your stick your thumb under or it looks like you are giving thumbs up.  Point your toes like crazy and straighten you knee.  Also for the choreography you need to show more emotions.  If you would have showed more emotions it would be a ton better.  You want to feel the music.  Sit down and listen to the song and see what this song means to you.  Then show that emotion in your dancing.  Don't be afraid to experiment with reaches, pulls, or even level changes.

Answer 2

I see the potential in you, but in lyrical you should try your hardest not to break your wrists. It is ok choreography,but to many repetitions... hope I could help... :)

Answer 3

I hope you're going to turn out and point your feet when you do this dance.  

Erm, the choreography's ok-ish, bit boring tho'.  Try to vary the level of your movements more.

Answer 4

Sorry, i wasn't big on it =(

Answer 5

it was okay. you kind of repeated what you did alot though. dont flop or break your wrists to much. put for life in to them. think about every bone in your hand moving one at a time.

Answer 6

in one part you were trying to do ballet with your arms but it sucked! sorry! um your hands need to be soften. You need to turn out your coupa`!

Answer 7

It was OK...

The choreography was alright but it was too repetitive.

Also, keep your legs straight. I understand that you were working with a small space but...

Hope I helped!