Is my first website good?

Question

http://www.mikey1.co.uk

how can i improve it?

Answer 1

Site is Ok.

Screaching around a ASDA carpark...If I put here what I want to say I'll get a VIOLATION NOTICE...TWA*

Answer 2

I think its pretty good! x

Answer 3

Ye its really good, well i think so neway!!

Answer 4

very good for your 1st web. i think the colour could be a bit brighter tho. good work, keep going.  

Answer 5

a clip of you screeching around

awesome

Answer 6

Your website looks GREAT!

But on further examine, I notice you done everything using Flash, right? So when I disable Javascript, your website layout will be completely ruined. That's no good.

It will be better if you can do it in HTML.

PS I disable Javascript mainly for the page to load faster (think something like disable Flash and those Adsense ads), but there are people do that for security as well.

Answer 7

Hi Mikey,

It looks good, some critical remarks however.

1) Why do you use a frameset? there is no need for it. The no frame section points to exactly the same document as the frame section does.

2) Why use flash for the main layout? The layout doen't use any features that can't be done using xhtml. Try to use flash only if you must.

When viewing the source, i se that you use a function to toggle flash on and off. Give people the chance to toggle flash off. Don't use it only for the (minority) of people that don't have flash. although it's good if it works. I would still advise you to use plain xhtml for the layout and flash for multimedia. This makes the page a lot less heavy

3) Because of flash and the frameset the site takes quit long to load. (Although my connection is very slow today)

Answer 8

Mikey, it's good. One suggestion - - The Hello and Welcome heading needs to be bigger, curved and more spaced out ( as if an aeroplane wrote the words in the sky, you understand? ).

Also, the top left corner pic needs to be of better quality (it conceals the left part of your head)

Overall, a good job !

Answer 9

no it's not good.  it's better.