Is my french correct?

Question

OK so i have to do an acrostic poem with my name.

Im going to type what i have and if you could please tell me what it means and if its correct spelling.

Mon anniversaire est le sept octobre

J'aime designer

Je suis aussi une soeur

Je suis de California et j'habite a Wyoming

Je suis une eleve

J'aime le tennis

Ma yeux sont (and i want to put brown but i dont know how to say brown in french!!)

Thats pretty much it. This is my first time learning french so i just wrote simple sentences.

O. and if you could help me on how to say Brown!!

Answer 1

what is your name first?

it all sounds good though.

brown is marron.

ma yeux sont marron.

trés bien, amie.

je parle français aussi! =)

Answer 2

Mon anniversaire est le sept octobre >> this one is good

J'aime designer >> what did you actually mean by "designer" it is used in French, but it is not widely accepted as correct

Je suis aussi une soeur >> hope you ment that you are a sister to your siblings and not a nun

Je suis de la Californie et j'habite au Wyoming >> Corrected this one

Je suis une élève >> don't forget accents

J'aime le tennis >> perfect

Mes yeux sont bruns >> corrected the first word and added French for brown ;)

Answer 3

It's all correct except--

California is one of the states that can be translated. It's 'Californie'.

Also, it's 'j'ai yeux' instead of 'Ma'.

Brown is 'marron' in french.

Answer 4

Here are your sentences, with a few adaptations:

Mon anniversaire est le sept octobre. (My birthday is October, 7)

J'aime faire du design. (I like to design)

J'aime dessiner. (I like to draw)

Je suis aussi une soeur. (I am also a sister)

J'ai aussi une soeur. (I also have a sister)

Je suis originaire de Californie et j'habite au Wyoming. (I am from California and live in Wyoming)

Je suis née en Californie et j'habite au Wyoming. (I am born in C. and live in W.)

Je suis une élève. (I am a student)

J'aime le tennis. (I love tennis)

Mes yeux sont bruns. (My eyes are brown)

J'ai les yeux bruns. (I have brown eyes)

Brown = brun, but since yeux is plural, you have to put brun in plural as well.

edit: marron is a type of brown, brun is the general word.