Is my german up to scratch?

Question

Ich esse Fastfood sehr selten, überhaupt wenn ich keine Zeit habe, das Mittagessen vorzubereiten. Solches Essen ist nicht immer billig und fast immer nicht gesund und deshalb vermeide ich es. Wenn ich mich für „das schnelles Essen“ entscheide, esse ich am liebsten italienische Speisen (Pizza, Spaghetti) oder etwas Chinesisches. Fastfood ersetzt dann das Mittagessen, also muss es gut schmecken, aber nicht zu fett sein: Der menschliche Koerper braucht gesundes Essen!

Answer 1

For a  second language it is not bad at all. A true german would have used a more complex sentence structure and adjectives and filler words  if needed to write this e.g. as an essay in school, but quite a few german blogs today (written by teenagers) are not much better.

I only stumbled over  the sentence "Das war weil ich Kekse gestohlen hatte!" This would need some explanation, I did not read the original, but from the translation there is no connection to the whole text (you have to be a master of the thiefs, to get thick only from stealing cookies). Maybe, you mean "heimlich besorgt/gegessen" , or "ohne erlaubnis meiner Eltern gegessen", but "gestohlen" is more associated with a diamond thief, or a bank robber. ;-)

PS: Using the note of exclamation is not very common in information texts. It is more common in novels and advertising.

Answer 2

Ja! Sehr gut.

Actually my Germans not so good yet but from wht ive learned in class it looks impressive

Answer 3

sounds good to me.... habe alles verstanden.