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Is my haiku good/clever/funny?

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Nineteenth century,

Women writing showy books:

How Austentatious!

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  1. Its nice


  2. :)

    yes. all of the above. i like it.

  3. Well, any answer you get to this would be an opinion.

    That said, in my opinion, it's seems a bit odd to use a four syllable word in the last line of a haiku.

  4. it got me confused more than anything :s

  5. I as well thought such a poem was in oder.

  6. isn't it ostentatious..well besides that I think it's sort of clever =D

  7. I'm not a fan of haiku; and I don't understand your point in this one.  I also believe you mispelled the last word, but you might have done that on purpose, to be clever, I guess.

    I have to admit that I don't find much enjoyment in this.

  8. I like the deliberate pun on the last line. Very good!

  9. funny

  10. no/no/no

    Not even a smile

  11. Hi

    Very creative, smartly written,Hilarious. : )

    All the guys especially will like that one..; )

  12. Groan.

    It's quite cute.

    Necessary pedantry: This is more of a senryu than a haiku. "Senryū tend to be about human foibles while haiku tend to be about nature, and senryū are often cynical or darkly humorous while haiku are more serious," says wikipedia.

    Aside from that, it's clever! And haha at the above "you spelled ostentatious wrong." I see what you did there.

  13. I love haikus  i annoy most of my friends by changing anything into one.. haha.. But no yeah its real good

  14. Clever and FUNNY..mostly clever though. great job.

  15. it's good

  16. This haiku is lame

    It is much too feminist

    Write a different one

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