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Is my poem The Gunfight entertaining?

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I rode into this one horse town

And off my horse my boots go down

I step into this one saloon

But they said they'd be closing soon

It's not that it is getting late

There's a gunfight going that won't wait

I think I'll stay and stick around

Just to see the one that will go down

The gunfight will go on at noon

I check my watch, it's coming soon

I see two men with holsters on

We'll see which gun is fastest drawn

They stare each other in the face

The town is there, they pack the place

A preacher says some lines he read

Two mother's pray alone instead

They then look each other in the eye

Two shots ring out, and one will die

The one shot low, last breath he vented

I told him high, this suit is rented

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  1. nice


  2. its pretty good cool

  3. I thought the ending was funny.  Get the english downn a little better.  A great effort !

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