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Is my poem any good? im 13 and i make up my own poems.

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this is an acroustic i wrote what do u think?

Only for now.

Life can sometime seem so unappealing.

Only we need to have the power to survive.

Nevermind the fact that we are still breathing.

Every single one of us, are dyibg inside while we're

Living lies, we all know that

In this world we are all staring into the cold,

Notorious, quite deceiving

Eyes of our fate torturing our innocent

Souls piece by piece pulling us away, until we're

Sitting alone in a corner waiting for no one.

I believe that loneliness can't be

So bad

Life moves on so fast and painful, but i will

Overcome everything, I don't

Need to care about fate.

Everyone should live each day as their

Last, we should scream, shout,

Yell, play, and ignore fate, but only for now..

'Till the next death, or war, or bombing...

Only for now... I keep repeating those words to

Myself, love, joy, and fun can't last forever. Only for now....

Everything can't stay like this forever.... Only for now.

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  1. get over yourself


  2. quite honestly it's very depressing to me but it's still better than anything i could do so 2 thumbs up.

  3. i like it :)

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