Is my poem insane and weird?

Question

Fractionized

Ten years wasted.

Swept away,

Three more to go;

Already broken.

Broken in half;

In thirds,

In fifths.

These five pieces won't fit together again,

Something invisible tore them apart.

Looking towards the future,

but dreading the now;

Three more years to go.

The constant reminder,

assure yourself,

only three more years to go.

Then you'll be free,

but what is free?

It breaks you in half;

into thirds.

Thirds;

not the cutest

not the oldest

just the middle.

The Middle.

Hold your head high;

throw away

the fifths and

keep the thirds;

and embrace what is gone.

Stay in the middle,

I'll remain broken.

^^ haha thats my first poem ever and I know the capitalization is really weird, but that's the way I originally wrote it. Sorry if it seems really wierd! thanks =]

Answer 1

It is good.  I'm not sure what it's about, but it has a lot of depth.  But very nice all the same.

Answer 2

It's good, reminds me of high school, not because of the math.  It does have soul.

Answer 3

That is probably one of the weirdest poems I've ever read. I wish I knew what you were talking about. It reminds me of school but then again it doesn't. Good first peom though mine was a tad bit short and has no substance. Do you have anymore material?

Answer 4

I believe that poem is really good. it has a lot of soul and anyone who doesnt think so has no sense of art.

Answer 5

Yes weird..........i am not exactly sure what you were thinking when you wrote this.....??????????? I am confused?????????

Answer 6

not bad for a first timer! the capitalization that you made is actually your right as a writer. i think your poem envelopes sincerity within you and it's not weird nor insane.