Is my poem number one or number two?

Question

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TEMPO

From where I sit

I see

forever,

past the forest,

despite the trees,

I hear the tones

from in the sequence,

and the beat

inside of me.

The noted charts,

the courses plotted,

wind and waves,

a melody,

Resolving chords

on wooden whispers

tapping out

a destiny.

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Answer 1

Talent yes... but sorry to say, number 2 on this one!

Answer 2

I'm number two! Nice to meet you number two!!! Austin powers. I think it's number two!

Answer 3

Great title.

And you execute it with a driving pace, so it lived up to the title.

Answer 4

*#1

Answer 5

.... cool. I noticed clear personification of todays for-closer problem and similes that let the reader relieve him/her mind to the point of discombobulation and psycho analysis.

Answer 6

Definitely a number 1.  There's a child's nursery rhyme about going to Bambury Cross to see a fine lady upon a white horse  that was set to a charming melody, your poem and aforementioned melody fit together like Cinderella and her slipper.  It will be in my head all day. Next thing you know, I'll be dancing. ONE,two, three; ONE, two, three...

Answer 7

NO 1

Answer 8

I like this, I don't think this a #2 at all. Should Line 7 begin with "from" or "form?"

Answer 9

Three

Answer 10

I love the rhythm. I love the rhyme. I love the contents. It's # 1. If you are speaking of 1 to 10, 10 being the highest...then it's a # 10. Thanks for sharing.

Answer 11

2

Answer 12

"Hi!",

What a ridiculous question you have asked on this fine day. Of course it;s 'No 1!'.

WELL DONE!

Cheers : )

Answer 13

It sings. Place it at the head of the line.

Answer 14

# 1 or # 2.... what are you talking about? please give more info

Answer 15

From whwere I sit ...It looks & sounds like a Beautiful Day !!! An Medley of natural Tunes

,,,# 1 Here on this end ........

Answer 16

absolutely #1  

row row row your boat ..Tempo might  perhaps  be considered  one of the required elements of existance....  space time and  tempo.

Without  sequence and tempo  we could have arrived here a puzzle of bits and pieces.

It put in me in mind of  the ancient Athenian galleys  and the propulsion method of travel. .. or the Egyptian funeral boats.   this is definately one of your keepers.