Is my poetry good or is it bad??

Question

i wrote this a couple of years ago when i was 12 but be honest

Who, when I am sad, wipes away my tears

Who always comforts me against my fears

Who compliments me when I am good

Who gives me lots of hugs like every mother should

Who has a hand that leads the way

Who has a smile to brighten my everyday

The answer is found in the woman who never grows old

And whose heart is made of pure gold

thanks

xx

Answer 1

woah....  when you said 12 i was like "it won't be that good" but WOW you impressed me!!! i almost dropped a tear when i was reading it!!! i reallllllly liked it because I could relate to it sooooo much!!!

Great Great Great Great Great Great Job!!!!!

And continue on the good work!!!

=D

Answer 2

This is beautiful

It indeed talks about emotions

both sad  and happy

for example sad and tears

and a smile that brightens my day

The person who does all this is

the woman who has a heart of gold.

comforting from fear is another line

that is touching

this is reassuring

Answer 3

its good as long you mean it!

Answer 4

good and if thee like it even better

why worry what other think if you enjoy writing carry on

And whose heart is made of pure gold

and keep thee warm when you  are cold

and make you feel  grand and bold

so you keep her in your when you our very old

your turn now

Answer 5

Good for a 12 year old! I really liked the first 6 lines and how they were going to reach a great climax, but I was rather disappointed with your ending couplet. It made your poem stumble a bit. Line 7 had 14 syllables and line 8 had only 8, and compared to the first lines of your poem, it was quite shallow.

But, overall, I think this was a good effort. well done!

Keep rading more poetry (good poetry) and Keep writing...

I'm always available if you needed any help.

Good luck :)

Your friend,

Lulle

P.S Please ignore those who just write empty compliments like "Ooh I loved it" or "you mad me cry" and garbage like that, they understand nothing about poetry.