Is the grammar correct 1?

Question

I was worried yesterday, because I had a dream the day before yesterday. In my dream, I was crying and sad. The dream was related to my mother. In the morning, next day, I called to my mother to ask her health. I ask of god, keep her health for a long time.

One of things that has occupied my mind for a long time is how can I speak and write fluently. So that I decided to write whatever is interesting in my mind. I hope, this procedure helps me.

Today, I decided about Asgarinejad’s situation. I wrote a letter to Mr. Shams as Venezuela’s program manager and said to him, it is better to be returned him. I said to Mrs. Fathi, it is a secret letter.

Answer 1

it's awesome dude...nice one

Answer 2

I was worried yesterday as I had had a dream about my mother.

In the morning I called my mother and asked about her health.

I asked god to keep her healthy for a long time.

I would like to speak and write fluently, so have decided to write down whatever is interesting me. I hope this procedure helps.

The 3rd one doesn't really make sense.

Hope that helps.

Answer 3

very correct, but it needs editing.