PREFACE:
My life flashed before my eyes that very moment. I gulped. I knew my fate was near, but at the same time I was happy and content to know I would be going out in his place. As the world was crumbling around me, I felt as if I spent the last two months well and with the one I loved. Up until I met him, my life was average and there was nothing special about me. There was a great story to tell, but, of course, there was a dagger pointing at my stomach, ready to pierce. It would soon be stained with my crimson blood. I would be dead and unable to tell anyone, but it's not like I would anyways.
My fingers wrapped around its heft. Even if I didn’t commit this suicidal act I would surely along with everyone else who stood on this earth. If I ever imagined how my life would be taken away, I would have never imagined it this way. It was a dreadful and a lovely way to die.
He looked at me with watering, emerald eyes. He took his free palm and gently caressed my cheek. It made me shiver. His other hand was clutching onto the silver blade, which couldn’t slice his skin, almost cozy next to mine. As our fingers lightly touched, my heart skipped a beat and I blushed. I still wasn’t accustomed to his touch as I should have been.
The silence let the thoughts race through mind freely.
The knife pinched my skin tighter. A lonesome tear left my eye. I cringed when it got to the point that it was hurting. I wanted to hold onto my last moments alive, but I also wanted to get it over with.
The knife punctured my shirt and then my skin. It was slowly entering my stomach. It stung so horribly and it was like no pain I had ever experienced. He let go of the blade. I moved my hands feeling around my stomach. It was wet and sticky. Then, I went numb. With the last of my energy I slipped out, “I love you.â€Â
The last thing I saw was him leaning over me, readying to give me a kiss. It suddenly went black.
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Chapter 1 with the girl arriving in Seattle for summer vacation that she is spending with grandparents. It's before she meets the guy.
The preface is still just a rough draft. What do you think of it?
I'm sorry if it's written poorly.
I'm 13, btw.
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