Is the song written by me good? It's okay if it's not its really really OKAY!

Question

Was it you?

Was it really you?

I wasn’t sure if it was you!

That’s what was really killen me!

From far away,

A glimpse of the past!

Was it true?

What we had those times?

I miss you

& I need you!

I love you,

& I want you!

From far away I couldn’t tell

You couldn’t even look into my eyes

Until I saw the badge hanging in your bag

That’s when my heart start beating

My brain started screaming

My eyes started to question whether it was really you.

Ow wooow wooow Ow

I want you by me

I want to be around you

You and I to share it.

Share it all.

No matter what,

No matter how,

I wanna be beside you

oh oh oh..

Answer 1

it's not bad at all.

I'm not crazy about the 4th line "That’s what was really killen me"

and I don't get the badge part (was the person a cop??)

Still, a good effort and shows promise.

p.s. good for you. Takes guts to put your work out there and accept criticism on it.

Answer 2

well....gooood,lack some experience but its surly good