Is there a better way to say this?

Question

"I plan on getting a residency in family practice because it has always been my childhood dream of becoming a general practitioner and advising people on various medical ailments."

I was trying to put various sentence structures in my essay. Is there a better way to write this sentence that will impress the reader? Corrections are welcome.

Thanks.

Answer 1

No, leave it like that. But add something about the place you want to work, how it has fueled your dream, and how great it is.