Is there a trigee hiding in here? (A pome)?

Question

Blue skies

blue eyes

God paints

rainbow colors

of crimson, gold

hazel and green

clouds whisper beauty

upon setting sun

lashes drift down

again dawn will come

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Blue skies.....................Blue eyes

God paints....................Visions of beauty

With crimson and gold...Hazel and green

Whispering clouds.........Lashes drift down

Upon setting sun...........Again dawn will come

Answer 1

What TD said!!!

Answer 2

REENIE!

This is a top-notch trigee. The best ones have the greatest seperation of ideas in #1 and #2. This one is going in the book.

Answer 3

wow. Wow. WOW! I am amazed, humbled, awed, and never again going to attempt a trigee.

Answer 4

Probably the best I've read yet...two different things come together in great style!  WOW!

Answer 5

You done good girl!  lol  My compliments.  

Answer 6

OOOOORRRAAAAAAHHHH!!!!!  I salute you Reenie!!

Answer 7

"Hi!",

That was a wonderful trigee, full of imagery.

And Congratulations!

WELL DONE!

Cheers : )

Answer 8

In hopes that none will compare my answer to those who praise everything, this has got to be the best triggee poem I have had the pleasure to read, two different subjects brough together to create a third and enhance the other two.  I bow to your greatness in this composition.

Answer 9

How descriptive is that, wonderful is what I say!  Good job well done! not to mention very clever !!Cheers!!

PS been working on one a few days, want to post mine as soon as I get the bugs out! LOL

Answer 10

I agree with TD, this is a top-notch Trigee! One of the best I have read.

Answer 11

And me!  And me! - no that isn't me begging to go into TD's book - that is me saying, ditto, I agree with wot them others sed.

You've been hiding your light under a bushel again.....just crawl out from there, leave your bunnies and WRITE some more like this.