Is this A Love Poem?

Question

you make me smile

you make me happy

you make me draw hearts all over

you mean the world to me

and i would do anything for you

you are perfect

perfect shape

and your eyes, i could stare into them all day they are beautifull they show me your even more beautiful soul

your skin is a perfect tone and each and every part of you is perfect

i could look and talk to you for the rest of my life and not find anything wrong with yuu

and i cant wait until the second you here by my side

and i mean it

the moment i can get a place of my own i want you here with me

i want to spend my entire life with you

making you happy

making yuu smile

making yuu the luckiest guy alive

l would do anything for you because yuu are the single most perfect thing in this world

your smile

your eyes

your ...everything

your personality!!!!

l would do anything just to make yuu smile

my heart belongs to you and beats to the name of Phil, Phil

people might say i should not love you more then the world

but l cant love you less

because you are my world

and my heart,my soul

l suppose all l am trying to say can be said

in three words

"l love you"

but the words are nothing without the feeling i have for you

this feeling is Amazing

i dont ever want to let yuu go

i want to hold you and kiss you

and just watch you sleep

i want to see you smile!

but i suppose all l want is for you to be Happy

and that is all l need

if l can go to bed

knowing you are happy

then l am happy

because all i was made for

the only reason i walk this earth is to make you happy

and make sure you are happy and safe

and i promise you i will do all i can to do that

and every night l dream of you

our house

us two together

l dream of holding your hand

and walking around with you

all the things i could show yuu

and do with you

and we might have a entire life time together

after this time apart

and this would be all i would need

to make me happy and l would do my best to make you happy

because l cant live without you!!!!!!

*long kiss*

man l hate being without you

l never stop thinking about you

like you are in my mind

and you are also in my heart

even though we are apart

we are only apart in distance

and you are always here in my heart

Loving Me,- and l Loving You.

Answer 1

it is not a poem!!! i find no rhym and . . . it is like a story!

Answer 2

Of course it is, my dear Blue Ghost? Don't you see your own exhilarated reflection when you read it? You have written it???

Fortunate, (and I hope for your own deserving grace) the fellow you've written it to, deserves it!

Lovely - straight from the heart and soul - spirit so open and generous!

Aha...just got it, girlfriend...your fellow deserves it!

Congratulations!!!

Sincerely, Grecia.

Answer 3

Ummm....walks away realizing this is a private meeting...

didn't mean to be a third wheel here or interrupt anything!

ma

Answer 4

Its not a poem, but why do U care ? U have put every dot of his image ( in Ur heart) on the paper.And U have expressed the details of Shakespeare's Romeo and Juliet, and U 'v almost dictated the BOND of The Merchant of Venice on the (poor) guy.

You have expressed Ur feeling in details and that is what counts. Btw, I guess U R 13 -14 yo, for only a person that age could right such long (poetic) verse about the beloved.I hope that after marriage U 'd find 2 or 3 lines of such verse, because most married woman don't. Good luck :-)  

Answer 5

WOW baby,Thank you so much for your beautiful words,I Love you the same in every way,You are my life,my heart,my soul,and my everything,I Love you too so much,I cannot live without you babe,You are my world.I dream and think of you everyday and night,We are in love forerver darling, I Love You forever more.