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Is this FREE VERSE or RANDOM Poetry?

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Dried rubies lay

Waste,

Etched within sanctioned ruins,

Crystal tears drops

Dispersed,

Seen only through

Blinded eyes,

Through the air,

Despair lingers,

Roaming empty rooms,

Engulfing life’s essence,

Wilted rose,

Sobs

Musty perfume,

Infuses,

Within the winter dew,

The fresh air,

Tainted,

Nothing remains seen,

Smashed fragments of porcelain,

Smothered between sheets,

Yesterday Echoes yearns

Within, today’s hope.

Jig saw puzzles

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  1. I think free verse

    It sounds like the person is sad! :(


  2. I don`t get it. I should go to Australia to learn English lol. I could look in my dictionary to discover the meaning, but I don`t really feel like it right now! maybe later......

    Is it about a abandoned home/mansion?

  3. It definately sounds free verse, but i like it

    Well done :)

    Its a beautiful peice of work

  4. I believe it is free verse, since there is no rhyme!  Cheers!! First I read something on the net that said random poetry rhyming but it was actually talking about Random House Poetry, so I think that is what it was referring too!   Prose poems have  have lines of various lengths and verse have lines of similar length!   Can you tell what you mean by random?   Thanks !!

  5. this is a really good poem

    i say its freestyle also

    you are creative

  6. Free verse, great poem!

  7. This is intriguing with much visual imagery.  My compliments.  I will have to reread this again to cipher.

  8. Oh, since I've posted several times, I'm a pro! LOL. You have learned well. I think it is wonderfully written, expressive, and full of color. I think it is free verse. Impressionable deep meaning. Interesting interpretation. Are the rubies red eyes while falling precious tears blind vision and heartbreak touches the rose. The fabric woven so tightly in anguish the air is polluted.Did the problem begin with the smashed fragments of porcelain? I dare see how far of base I am.

  9. Cool

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