Is this Good? is it understandable?

Question

I'm Struggling with my mind

Kept on thinking of you

Although it feels its best to die

Yet I live another day

Its you who makes me live

You I want to spend time with

Time had changed

Situations change

But my love for you had never changed

-Baby I love you so much...I don't want to lose you

So what ya thnk?...I'd be writing this on a small piece of paper then fold it to an small envelope and give this to her..well im just a high school stud...oh, im a guy. its the poem ok?

Answer 1

I think that you should write it on a small piece of paper then fold it to a small envelope and shove it down your whining throat.

If you want to write a girl a poem, make it poetic.

Here is a literal translation of your poem:

I am quite unintelligent

I keep thinking of you

I am a theatrical self centered crybaby

I am still a theatrical self centered crybaby

I like you

I like you

I think I know what I am talking about

I think I know what a situation is

I think I know what love is

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If any girl is impressed with those sentiments, you deserve her.

Answer 2

It's very good! give it to her!

Answer 3

i like it