Is this POEM any good? It's about the Joker! ^_^?

Question

Ok, ppls. I wud b rlly upset if u stole it (not that its THAT great or anything) but c'mon! Its just not nice, so pls don't use without permission...pls?

The Joker

A sinister crimson smile spreads across my lips

Thinking wicked thoughts while weapons I equip

My inky eyes narrow as I step into the street

I have a dark night ahead and a hero to beat

I feel it's time for a new villain to grow

One whose not afraid to watch the blood freely flow

I'm going to show them all whose really chief

And never will I suffer any of their grief

I ask before I kill them, one last query,

“Why so serious?” I laugh viciously, as they get teary

Then as the blood pours from a fresh cut I go insane

Merely a part of my psychopathic game

So here I am carving smiles into their faces

Dicing their flesh into ribbons and laces

Waiting for the hero to try and save the day

Anticipating a new game for me to play

Because around here u can't just b mediocre

They'll c, i'll show them, I am the Joker

Answer 1

Hey, how are you doing?

Tell you what, you're quite creative. NOW, is when I realize how passionate you're about The Joker. Even I think he's pretty cool, especially the one in The Dark Knight, but I guess you're a huge fan of his.

Now, for your poem, I think it's fantastic! Seriously, I'm not trying to kiss butt for a BA, I really think it's amazing. Well, I guess you should make a small website about the Joker and put this as an introduction. And, you can add the link to that site in your Y!A profile so you can get reviews on it and once and if, you make it, I'll bookmark it for sure.

I RARELY star questions. This is gonna be one of them.

Answer 2

I really don't know what to say.. I read it many times .. the words were flowing rapidly, the rhyme is OK, the lines balance needs some control .. U gave a full picture of the Joker & the environment of gambling.. Its so bloody dark.. but agian so describtive.. I like it .. good luck!!

Answer 3

I think it's ace!

Answer 4

really good, reminds me of the series ashes to ashes, based on the song ashes to ashes by david bowie

Answer 5

I love it. Bloody brilliant! So evocative and the imagery? Wow! Wonderful work...thank you for sharing!

Answer 6

Nice

Answer 7

dear har-harlequin,

      i really enjoyed your poem, i must admit i had i sinister grin the whole time i read it, so please don't come over to administer a carved smile, i've already displayed it.-blurey