Is this Spanish correct? ?

Question

Hi all

I'm really bad at Spanish (even though I've been learning it for about 2 hours a week at school for 4 years!)

I was wondering if you could visit the following page which I have created (as I'm trying to make a Spanish blog), an tell me what's wrong with the Spanish, I am assuming there is something wrong with it because I know I can make quite a few mistakes!

Link: http://desastre.wordpress.com/contacto/

Thanks for any help anyone can give in advanced!

Answer 1

"Simplamente" should be "Simplemente".

You switch between two commands: textbook version (using the infinitive) and then the usted version. Also, "haz click" is in "tú" form, for some reason. (Consistency would be nice.)

"Aqui" has an accent mark on the "i". By the way, some words are missing accent marks. ("a mi" should be "a mí".)

Other than that, I think it's interesting and pretty good.

Good luck!

Answer 2

No it is not.

And for 10 points here i go.

Note: The corrections are between [ ] symbols. That means that the proper way to say the word ins spanish is between [ ]. There are many words without the "tilde" (á,é,í,ó,ú) i made the corrections. Also you to put some question marks. The empty simbols, means you have to erase "se" and yo have to erase "lo".

"Contacto

Si tienes una foto o un video gracioso de un desastre, por favor, ¡[envía] una foto abajo!

[¿] [Cómo] subir un imagen [?]

Simplemente, haz click abajo para el sitio donde puedes subir un imagen:

Subir [Imágenes]

Cuando has [subido] tu imagen, entonces, copiar el “Enlace directo” y pagarlo abajo en la forma.

¿Qué más puedo hacer?

* Escribe “desastre” en tu imagen.

* Tu imagen [  ] debe estar [graciosa] universalmente, no [sólo] para un grupo pequeño

* Escribe un párrafo sobre [tu] imagen que vas a enviar.

* Escribe tu nombre en la forma.

Tu presentación no [ ] se muestra aqui. [Se] [manda] directamente a [mí] "

The rest is ok

hope this helps......