Is this a Love poem... or is it actually good?

Question

As Close As I Want to Get To a Love Poem

Tell me you are broken

Let me know your week

I have no problem telling you

That I am less than meek

My failures stack up many

My victories are few

But tell me that you need me

I have always needed you

To follow in my line of shorter poems for the day… if you could tell me what you think apart from the title I would enjoy reading your thoughts!

Blessed Be, Siren

Answer 1

Sounds like something said between a couple that have been together for a while. I liked it.

Answer 2

I do not care for love poems... and I liked this one so now it is not a love poem... it is a truth poem!

Answer 3

It is actually good it seems as though this poem is personal and that it is very genuine

Answer 4

Ah, that's called for a person in which chemistry is shared only. expressing wise at least.

So, is this a love poem or a psychological way of asking whether "feelings" are mutual?

I don't see this, as what you would call a love poem. I see this "poem" as a question, or questions?

Answer 5

As always your poem sings to me! I am astounded anew and missing you no more now that you have brought me this new enjoyment to my day. Thank you child, I have always admired your work.

Answer 6

My week goes from Sunday to Saturday, like everyone else's. You mean "you're weak." You can get away with this in speech, but on the page, higher standards are essential. Regretfully, I will have to notify The Board of Directors of the Poetry Section, Division of Egregious Errata and Erotica. The poem is okay.

Answer 7

I liked it :) thumbs up!

Answer 8

The poem makes me wonder why broken and weak are core components.  Is that where the need comes into play?  Interesting poem and well written.

Answer 9

L2 - "let me know you're weak" - or are you on a weekly communication thing. LOL ♥