Is this a Random poem or what..??

Question

ok this is another poem I wrote. I have no clue if it makes any sence cuz out of no where when I was about to ask a question I started spewing out random words. well here it is and tell me what you think:

Forever Darkness

I lie in my own darkness

waiting for my life to reach its final destination

my lifes not moving

its stuck in its usual ways for no light to be ever seen

im waiting for the day I can look upon my life and see the true meaning

Is this my true meaning of everything?

drowning in my sorrow and darkness?

if so im nothing,nothing more than the dirt on my very own feet

crippled I lay and weep for my self

for my life..

for hope

Answer 1

Whether it makes sense to us or not, that doesn't matter. Poetry is a way to express yourself, and a lot of time only you or other poets would truly understand what your getting at, because we look at things different than tha ones who don't write poetry.

This makes perfect sense to me, and I hope thigns come together soon for you in your life. This was also a beautiful poem, you have talent

Answer 2

Poetry is the expression of the heart. This is very deep. I hope you can walk out of the darkness and into the light. Peace to you my friend. Keep writing, you have a real talent.

Answer 3

OK

Answer 4

That's great never stop writing, Ideas for writers usually come to them when they don't expect it.

                      J J

Answer 5

WOW THAT WAS DEEP! good poem...you have talent..