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Is this a constellation poem?

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Wishes

Whispers in the red night,

wondering. Tomorrow

won't take away the pain,

will leave me on my own.

Would that I could see the

world; knowing that I am

worthy, perhaps, of love.

Author's Note - Style of poem is a Pleiades. http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/pleiades.html

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  1. A star for a star.


  2. Next you will be writing wishing well poems... in the words of so many other of your admirers, great job....

  3. ah lovely

  4. If it's any consolation

    I like the form of Pleiades

    Now the new sensation

    So I will take three more of these.

    Resume  your cerebration.

  5. You have the proficiency and art to undertake yet another style of poetry with grace and beauty.  This is quite lovely and seems like one of the more difficult of the forms, made to look effortless by a master poet like yourself.  Your gift is a gift to us all who read your poems.   Thank you.

  6. This is a poem.  My compliments.

  7. You are most certainly worthy of love! I love this and the style. Never heard of this style before, thank you for sharing it!

  8. you are worthy, and blessled as a poetress.

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