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Is this a cute story?

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It's about me and my horse. Me and my friends were playing a game to see who could tell the best childhood story that changed our lives.

It was my birthday and I was four years old. I had been at my grandmothers house for the two weeks before. I came home on my birthday. Well, I had a little party with just my family. We had horse balloons, paper plates, paper cups, and napkins. Everything had a horse theme! I was led outside with a blindfold on. I took off the blindfold. In front of me was a beautiful white horse. I couldn't think of what to name it and I had a cup of milk in my hand. White milk. White horse. "Milky!" I shouted. And that's her name. Come on, I was four! My parents had another surprise for me. The reason I had to go to Grandma's was because they were building a stable! Inside was the usual stable things (stalls, troughs, etc.) but there was a room in the back. My name was on the door in pink paint. Inside the room was a bunkbed, without a bottom bunk. Below the...

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  1. You need to tell  the rest of the story :) lol


  2. Awe man you are so lucky! That would be the BEST bithday presant anyone could EVER get! I think it stands a rlly good chance, good luck

  3. It sounds like you were really lucky!

    i wish my parents built a stable for me and brought me a new horse! lol

    wheres the rest of the story?

  4. So lucky! I wish I could be like you, by having sleepovers with my horse. So anyway, I think your english teacher would like that.

  5. yea wow.. i must have missed something... seriously missed something. did your horse die?

  6. depends on your friends story if theres is better than who knows

    but yours is cute though

  7. probably would be a very cute story if you finished it lol!

  8. Add more details to it. Like what were your favorite things to to do together. What was her favorite treat. The first time you rode her, etc....And if she has past away or you don't have her anymore, add that in there. Don't forget to put in there what Milky taught you. And how that still applies to you today.
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