Is this a full-blown poem?

Question

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Summertime please

don’t breath on me,

The sun has got me

on my knees

believe…it too frikken hot!

Sunshine leave

the night to me,

I stand alone in

cooling breeze,

and please…turn out the frikken lights!

Moonbeam beat

upon my chest,

reet to me,

the shadow’s best,

the rest…are too frikken blown!

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Answer 1

Hotter than the hinges of h**l,

it's so humid they've rusted as well.

Out in the garden my skin is glistening,

back to the house,

blessed air conditioning!

Hope it cools off soon.  Is it November yet?

Answer 2

Sure is!!

We have one more "comfortable" day and then the 90's and humidity will be here.... Ick.

Stay cool!

Answer 3

Ah yes, Frikken! The Viking goddess of diurnal copulation. Not as well-known as the goddess of nocturnal wooky-wooky, her sister Frigga.

Answer 4

It frikken IS I tell ya! (oh gee sorry - slight PMS outburst there)

"And in other news....Gordon Ramsay meets Martian Poet, full story in the news at 6"

My apologies to anyone offended by language used in this answer, yes I realise it should have written "freaken" (it's a girl thing)

Yeth folkth the Frikkative tenthe ith very important in thethe thituationth!

Answer 5

sure! if you're the author, it's done when you say it is!

btw... very cute!

Answer 6

I liked it....i think your frustration comes through very well

I can relate...I hate the summer

Answer 7

I'm not sure if they'll like it

If it was my drink I might just spike it

even drink it up complete

... the rhyming bits they tasted sweet!

Summertime is quickly passing

Robobear has tucked his *ss in

Mankini string stretched to leather

buttocks clenched 'gainst hotter weather?

Don't be a poetic tool...

soon you'll be feeling fine n' cool

Iran will tho' be much, much hotter

because beastly Bush is a goddam rotter

Is it really a full blown poem?

There's no sure way of truly knowin'

I'd call it a poetic oration

Tyler might dub it a Master Euwation!

Answer 8

"Hi!",

I have one problem with his whole poem and that is, your celebrating the wrong bloody season as.........

"IT'S FRIKKEN WINTER!"

I am freezing my a$$ of as the price of electricity is  FRIKKEN ridiculous, I mean we moved to the country as the houses are cheaper, but you pay with the cost of  living. Story of our lives. My electricity bill went from $300.00 - $2000,00. I know that Howard increased the prices. and we are the highest taxed country in the world, but blow me some heat from your summer skies..  well now that I have done what I do best....dribble  lot of FRIKKEN c**p. I am going to say, what a very funky summer day poem.

Sorry slight suffering of PMS (Price maxed severely) LOL  : )

WELL DONE!  

Cheers  : )

Answer 9

full blown frikken poem.

Answer 10

It's definitely fricken got something, Nice use of context independant elemental punctuation components in triplicate.

Answer 11

It will be full-blown when you change "breath" to "breathe."

Answer 12

Beautiful cadence. I wasn't sure about:

"reet to me," in S3

Some really great lines though...so yes it is a full-blown frikken poem.

Answer 13

Oh yes?  My sympathies are however lost on myself. You see,

out there means... The cotton is high,  Liv'n is easy and the fish are jump'n....

I am Canadian and that means my heart pumps icicles. Little red icicles!

.....snow, howling winds, ice and that's in the kitchen!.

Out here means...It becomes impossible to walk across the  river, which is frozen solid seven months a year. Fish are not jump'n . Trees sometimes snap in two when the sap inside them  freezes, weakens and shifts a little. Alcohol and oil  prices soar.

On the other hand it takes only three days to dig a grave. Frostbite is rare, its too frikken cold to go out.   Oh Yes! Summertime.. love it and your poem!

Answer 14

I believe there's typo on the 5th line... (it too frikken hot) ---> (it's too frikken hot) Was Felix doing all the typing? lol

Anyway...cool, soothing, dreamy imageries you have portrayed up there... =)