Is this a good poem I wrote, any advice>?

Question

I wrote it today. I have a killer toothache

Its called:

A Ode to a Tooth Ache

Is it a curse?

I fear the worst has yet to come

Another line of verse

To adverse from pain

Let me reimburse,

For all those years of not brushing

Answer 1

Try reading this tomorrow, when you're not on pain killers anymore.

Answer 2

yea sure I think its cool that you wrote about what you were feeling and it is a cute poem!

Answer 3

It's okay I feel like you should make it longer though.

Answer 4

its ok i guess

make it longer

and if i hadnt known before hand what it was about it would have made no sense to me.

but i like that u wrote about what u were feling

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Answer 5

ouch. go to the dentist and take some pain killers or something.

nice poem. it should be on a poster at the dentist office, on those annual post card dentist send out, or in those dental magazines as a quote. or a colgate commercial... sell it.

Answer 6

very neat poem. well structured. I wouldnt change a thing. You wrote a spontanious poem and i like it.

please please my poem

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