Is this a good poem about my boyfreind????

Question

i wrote it last night... and i was jusy wondering if it was good...

thank you...

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my love for you is sill blosming

It's gonna grow into a beauitful flower that will never die

and when it does, its just gonna grow back..

just beacause we're

MENT TO BE!!

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tell me what u think..

thanks in advance

ps..

this was my first one ever!!!

Answer 1

You did a beautiful job on this poem for him,

and for your first poem.  

I like how it flows

with love blossoming

and growing in a beautiful flower

flowers may wilt but our love won't

I like the line just because we're (meant) to be  

Answer 2

I just hope he reciprocates vollychick, By the way, you're not related to Spellchick by any chance....?

Answer 3

WOW, that is really good. I mean really really good.  

Answer 4

WOW you are so bad at trying to take the p**s ,I don`t think anyone will notice ..

I think you should try better than that ,it is so ******* OBVIOUS  

Answer 5

yes