Is this a good poem for a 13 year old?

Question

I woke up in the middle of the night,

With my hands held so tight.

I felt like there was an empty hold,

Not like a solid pole.

With my stomach down, and my head held up high,

I started to pray to that mighty guy.

I had so much on my mind,

So I asked him to give me a sign.

A sign to help me through,

So then I saw one big clue.

My friends and family are always there,

Now I know that they care.

So let this be known right now,

I am very compound.

As I feel back asleep,

Nothing made a peep.

Everything was peacefully and silent.

and what is title for it?

Answer 1

I like it. (: And I also think that the title should be Peaceful and Silent.

Answer 2

It is an excellant poem

and for someone who is 13 years old

The part of the poem I see you woke up

I am thinking there may have been a bad dream

because holding your hands so tight.

and wondering if anyone was in heaven

holding your head up high

and to pray.

That is good your famly and friends were there

now you can go back to sleep and rest assured.

Answer 3

How are you compound ? I don't even know what that means.

And.. you "fell" back to sleep. Not "feel" .

Title :1- Sleep tight

          2-Safe in the night

          3-A dream

Answer 4

It is pretty good, but i think you need better rhyming words like, instead of guy you should put a more expressive word.

A title could be:

In the Middle of the Night

Also, I think you need another word for compund, it doesnt really make sense.

Answer 5

Nice job.  Poetry is hard to write.  Last line peacefully should be peaceful. Also hold and pole don't rhyme.  Maybe

I felt like there was an empty hold

My body even felt cold

or

I felt like there was an empty hold

I even shivered from the cold.

You saw a clue - what did you see? Not Clear?

A picture reminded me - family and friends are always there

Now I know that they care.

Title ?

Peaceful and silent

Super job!  Hope you don't mind my input.  

Keep writing!

Answer 6

Yes! That is amazing.

Answer 7

Very well written. I'd use "Peaceful and Silent" for a title.