Is this a good poem for my gf?? pt2

Question

(i have added some more details nd improved it tell me what you think.this is the first--->http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;... )(ps im only 13 lol)

First time I saw you it was love at first site

My heart grew wings and it began to take flight

Since being with you

My life has been right.

You're just as pretty as you are clever

And I want you to know that

I will love you forever

Who knew you where such a beautiful girl? ,

Much more beautiful than a little pearl

The first time we kissed,

I could not resist,

And obviously,

After that you were very missed,

You and I belong,

And we shall remain strong,

I would have done a song,

But I was scared that I would do it wrong,

My heart is flying like a dove,

Because I can feel your love,

And I mean all of the above,

Emily happy birthday, I love you 

LYSM!

(heart made of x’s)

but if u want me to give this to her u have to read below pls pls urgent

2 weeks ago me and my friend went out on a double date,it worked out succesfuly...we (me and my gf) use to message eachother every day saying we love each other were missing each other etc...now its two weeks and today she told me on msn 'i am very confused' 'i said why' 'she ddnt tell me,l8r on she says çan i tell you something?'and i say of course! she says that is it ok if we just be friends instead of bf gf (im her first bf btw) she said shes not used to it, i know that she loves me because of the messages (she ment them) so why did she brake up with me? she said we should be friends FOR NOW<-- (for now? so she wants to get back) it did kinda happen fast when i asked her to be my gf, why did she 'brake' up with me in the first place!? plsss help

i want to know:

1 r we gonna get back with each other?

2 why did she brake up with me if she loves me!?

3 does she want to think about our relationship?

and anwser some on your own...pls,thanks ps best anwser=10 POINTS!

ps when she asked me if its ok to be friends i understtood sometin...so i told her that it dsnt matter i understand did that gimme a boost or did nothing (she acted surprised/happy)

Answer 1

thats a great ponit. now to answer your questions:

1: if she said she just wanted to be friends for now, then you prob will get bac together...thats wat me and my bf did.

2: she prob broke up with u b/c it was all new to her. the same thing happened with my first bf...its all new and scary and sometimes you just feel like yo need a break but you will prob get bac together, so she still rpob loves u.

3: to tell yo uthe truth if she wants to have a break, she wants to stop thinking about you, but its not always easy. i was constantly thinking about my bf and our reationship wen we broke up.

it will get better. saying she just wanted to b friends for now could also have meant that she wanted to get to know u better and then continue ur relationship on a higher level. kts always better to kno someone before you start going out with them. good luck! tell me how it goes! =D

Answer 2

Awesome Poem..She&#039;s Gonna Love It!

Answer 3

Nice poem- you should give it to her it will make her so happy. She is probably scared of being in a relationship since she has never been in one before. Give her the poem, and tell her how you feel. She cares for you or she wouldn&#039;t have said so in the messages.

:) Good luck!

Answer 4

well first of all i love the poem and i think you should give it to her =]

and ur girlfriend actually sounds a lot like how i am when i have a boyfriend, just give her the poem but give her a little space for a while, that way she will see how much she means to you but will have time to think about u and her,if you put to much pressure on her about getting back together it will only make it worse,but just be a good friend for now and she will remember what a great guy u r,because honestly most guys never write poems for their girlfriends and i think she would be stupid not to get back together with you,so i think it will work out for u 2 but just give it some time, good luck =]

Answer 5

Okay, in general, it&#039;s always good to give a poem you&#039;ve written to a girl. They find it sweet and they like the effort. Don&#039;t overdo it, though-- you don&#039;t want to seem like you need her too much.

Your girl sounds like she&#039;s got a lot going on. She may be just getting active in dating, and that could mean she&#039;s got other dudes asking her out. She probably doesn&#039;t want you to lose interest and start dating someone else, but she wants to be free to go out with someone else if she gets asked. That&#039;s why she says &quot;for now.&quot; Keep in mind that everyone at 13 likes different people (you can&#039;t tell me there aren&#039;t at least a few different girls you&#039;d like to date).

My advice? Save your poem for when she&#039;s really earned it by being with you and nice to you for at least a month or so. Be friends, be cool, and try dating someone else, or at least appear to be ready to. Girls always want a guy more if they think they can&#039;t have him. If she thinks she can have you easy, she&#039;ll think she&#039;s too good. So hold back some, let her think she has to work for it a little. You&#039;ll be surprised at how well this works!