Is this a good poem? i made it myself?

Question

I gave up a long time ago

Stopped caring about everything

Blocked out the world around me

Dying slowly, that’s my guarantee

The smallest things

I know and see

Killing me slowly

No one even knows

The people have eyes

Yet are blind to the world

Too conceited to see others around them

Crying for help, and reaching out

Broken heart

Broken soul

I lost my life

Long ago

Answer 1

That's a very eloquent and touching poem. It reminds me of a song I used to try to sing:

"Give Your Heart A Home"

by Don Francisco

I hear your hollow laughter your sighs of secret pain

Pretending and inventing just to hide your shame

Plastic smiles and faces blinkin' back the tears

Empty friends and places all magnify your fears

If you're tired and weary, weak and heavy laden

I can understand how it feels to be alone

I will take your burden, if you'll let Me love you,

Wrap My arms around you, Give your heart a home

It hurts to watch you struggle and try so hard to win

But trade your precious birth right for candy coated sin

Wasting precious moments restless and confused

Building up defenses for fear that you'll be used

If you're tired and weary, weak and heavy laden

I can understand how it feels to be alone

I will take your burden, if you'll let Me love you,

Wrap My arms around you, Give your heart a home

Take My yoke upon you and walk here by My side

Let Me heal your heartaches, dry the tears you've cried

Never will I leave you, never turn away

Keep you through the darkness lead you through the day

If you're tired and weary, weak and heavy laden

I can understand how it feels to be alone

I will take your burden, if you'll let Me love you,

Wrap My arms around you, Give your heart a home

Wrap My arms around you, Give your heart a home