Is this a good poem? its in spanish.?

Question

El amor ,Da calor,un amor ardiente,i esplandeciente

Answer 1

instead of "I" its Y esplandeciente other than that its goodd.

Answer 2

sure.

Answer 3

You should have put an english translation. It's okay though, I went to Babel Fish and got it translated for you.

The love,Da heat, an ardent love, esplandeciente i

I don't understand it... sorry

Answer 4

it's cool

Answer 5

es bella!

Answer 6

i think it cool awsome:}

Answer 7

The love, Gives heat, an ardent love, i esplandeciente-that's a good start, but come on keep it going

Answer 8

un poema muy magnificante

Answer 9

sounds good to me... but then again i don't know spanish.

Answer 10

Muy bien!

Answer 11

uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...