Is this a good poem? :/?

Question

nothing to write, nothing to say.

speechless i am.just not today.

your apology meant as much as the

cheep material she's made of.

i'll hide behind the glass along with

my dove.eyes forward standing straight.

looking back would mean to break.

wise beyond my years my tears and fears.

i won't watch you forget about me.

never less the day, a drear.

Answer 1

Depends. does it say what you want it to say? my English instructors ruined many a good poem with analyzing every word for meter, message, and rhyme.

Your first lines start out interesting: I see a writer sitting with a blank page deadline looming.

Leading into "you apology..." I agree it reads like a journal entry about a love gone bad.

If that's the images your after, it's a fair poem. second part could use some rewrite.

Answer 2

good

Answer 3

i like it. the punctuation choices are interesting.

Answer 4

This sounds like it is meant to be a journal or diary entry. The fellow has been cheaply betrayed by a friend and his lover. He is heartbroken but won't let it show. It's been a terrible day is his summing up. He draws the reader in as he puts a lot of emotion and a very clear story into 10  lines that he says are "nothing to say, nothing to write."

Answer 5

its nice....but i guess reveals more thn u  probably want to...