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Is this a good poem?

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Is this a good poem? This is the second poem i have written. It's called You don't always get second chances

You Don't Always Get Second Chances

The only time

i hear your cry,

is when daddy comes home

feeling like your gonna die.

Mommy spends time in her room

to get away from Daddy,

but he finds her

and beats her badly.

Why can't he understand

that Mommy is so afraid of him,

seeing her hide under the bed

like hiding in a den.

he's drunk when he does it

trying to get away his feelings,

only when he isn't drunk

he doesn't understand why his inside is peeling.

on a saturday night

he comes home like normal,

even though this time he isn't drunk

like he is abnormal.

Daddy goes straight to Mommy's room

running fast,

only to find

that she must have passed.

he sat there and cried

like he never had before,

but he now figured out

he should've done that way before.

but now it's too late

because she is gone,

but she will never be forgotten

from dawn to dawn.

while Daddy was crying

he never saw,

that note by her bedside

he never recalled.

"I hope you now see

wat i went through,

being beaten and bruised

now you will feel the pain too.

In life you don't always get second chances

you should think twice for what you do,

you will never find

that special part of you."

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  1. Wow. That's a beautiful poem. Sad, but true. :) Keep writing!


  2. It's beautiful. It almost made me cry. And it sends such a good message.  

  3. So good..

    but painful
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