Is this a good poem ?

Question

Also I would like for you to apply your own definition to this poem. What do you think it means ?

It is great to be able to sit in a park undisturbed . Sit on a wooden picnic table .My Ipod in my pocket , My cellphone on silent , and not even the site of an ant.

I just inhale the gentle breeze and embrace the freshness of the grass and flora and fauna . Everything is green and everything is still .

A perfect spot to meditate and rejuvenate .... Until a kid throws his ball , or frisbee , and now I have been disturbed....

By:Midnight G. Estes

Answer 1

Well,this is what I gather from the poem...you are at the park,taking your time off,doing nothing in particular,just having a great time by yourselves and then it comes to an end when someone comes up ro you,say a kid whose ball has landed by your feet....

I like it..pretty good...I'd say - lovely little poem...just one little suggestion, when you write poems of this sort maybe you can attempt a diff style,maybe a rhyming style...but this is great alrt..keep up the good work...

Peace,Cheers,Respect !

Answer 2

good it makes me feel, uh, weird idk

Answer 3

Here is my definition of this poem

You are at a park at peace

Enjoying your time in a place

where you can be free

you have your ipod and the cellphone

is off.  Now this is quiet.

The weather is ideal with

a gentle breeze

Everyone else is doing something

like throwing a frisbee, and balls

With no one around where you were it was

nice and peaceful

Now its not quiet

Answer 4

IT IS TOLLALY SO KOOL I LOVE IT ALOT

Answer 5

well ya.  that's just what it is.  too free a body mind and soul.  everything comes to life right.  when that ball.  you react

Answer 6

What I get from this is that there is some one out side just sitting and not doing any thing, just being there.  Using the senses to discover the wonders of the world and breathe a moment alone and in peace.  However, like all good things they can abruptly end at the drop of a dime.

Answer 7

DUDE U ROCK MAN U SHOULD TRY TO PUT IT IN THE BOOK I LUVE U MAN

Answer 8

it good...i guess...i enjoyed it

Answer 9

yeah i guess