Is this a good start for a love poem?

Question

Whenever you smile at me

You cause my heart to melt

and it flows to come to thee

And so i've always felt

when I look at the gleam of jewels

I remember your shining eyes

And it makes me the happiest soul

to know that love never dies

Answer 1

awsome, keep going seems like you're on a roll.

Answer 2

That is bloody brilliant. I love it. You really have a rare talent, wow!

Answer 3

Excellent poem and beautiful choice of words

You should definatley consider printing and publishing you're masterpiece!

i thoroughly enjoyed that piece ofpoetry.

It is an excellent begginning to a magnificint love poem!

im jealous of the person who recieves it from you!

youve got great talent!

Please continue to write!

Best of luck xxxxxxxxxxxx