Is this a good start please be truthful?

Question

THANK YOU

im sorry that i couldnt be there

that doesnt mean i dont care

cuz your someone special in my heart

and mentally well never be apart

so im not going to say goodbye

or that ill make me cry

at least more than now

i really hope you understand

i loved all the times we cherished

and all the smiles weve gianed together

and i just want to say

thank you for each and everyday

Answer 1

im sorry that i couldnt be there

that doesnt mean i dont care

cuz your someone special in my heart

and mentally well never be apart

so im not going to say goodbye

or that'll surely make me cry

at least more than i'm left with now .

i really hope you understand

that i loved all the times we cherished

and all the smiles we weave together

and i just want to say

thank you for each and everyday

^ I editted somewhat . (:

hope you like it . !

Answer 2

It has a nice flow and the words are pretty but it's more like a song than a poem. But it has something special good keep going.......