Is this a good title for a story?

Question

Title: The Theatre Thriller

Story: An opera is playing while a murder is being held backstage. The Director was killed... The suspects are Mr Blue from another country, Mrs Harrison: Wife of the Director, Ms Aza: Unknown history but holding a knife and mysteriously going to the toilet while the director goes backstage to get killed.

Good title? Also opinion for the story!

Answer 1

Sounds like a ripoff of Cluedo.

Answer 2

For the title, i suggest not to use 'the'. Plus i dont really think it suits the story. The story sounds a bit like Cluedo and 'a girl with a knife mysteriously walking to the bathroom' isn't very subtle.

Answer 3

title- bad

storyline- great!

Personally i like titles to be a little creative. Instead of just THE XX maybe dont use THE? pherhaps you could do something like opera of death rofl!  or something smart like ermmm "Silent director"

Answer 4

Title: Change it, it's all right, but the story is great so that isn't good enough. Maybe Backstage Antics? I don't know, not the best with titles! :]

Story: Love it! How are you writing it? First person or third person?

Answer 5

the title isn't right for your plot. i suggest it as "The Night of the Opera"

Answer 6

     If an opera's playing, try: 'Song of Murder'  or 'Direction for a Kill'

     Sounds as though you have a good mystery on your hands.  I don't really like the name 'Mr. Blue.'  Try something like 'Mr. Kaufmann'  I'm not good at mysteries.  I think you'll do a lot better.  Hope I've helped.

Good luck

Mike B