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The Security Commision requires public companies to disclose meaningful financial and other information to the world-wide and nationwide investing public, which provides a public source for all investors to use to judge for themselves if a company's securities are a good investment. As a Public Listed Company, do not just advertise your financial results for the sake of advertising in the newspapers. You are duty bound to disclose to the world-wide investing public as well as those missed reading or seeing the notices from Public Companies published in various daily newspapers

It is practically impossible for the investing public to see the Notice Advertisements From Public Listed Companies published in various daily, weekly, monthly newspapers. There are many major news papers being published in which carry a substantial amount of Notice Advertisements From Public Listed Companies. Even if one procures all the news papers on regular basis, one may not be able to ensure that he/she has seen all the Notices From Public Listed Companies : Financial Statements( Quately, Half- Yearly, Annually), Balance Sheet/ AGM, EGM/ Divident Payments/ Book Closures/ Prospectuses and Companies news.

BENEFITS OF PUBLISHING NOTICES ONLINE

Research shows public listed companies have been paying for a very expensive advertising to publish their Financial Statements( Quately, Half- Yearly, Annually), Balance Sheet/ AGM, EGM/ Divident Payments/ Book Closures/ Prospectuses in newspapers to nationwide public who probably were never out there to see these very important notices. Many notice ads appear in a single issue of a newspaper and the potential for any one's notice Ad to capture reader attention is minimal. The readers may not read the section advertised in, or readers may simply have skipped the page because it contained little or nothing else of their interest.

In view of the above difficulty, an Enterprise have undertaken this online commerce project to compile all the Notice Advertisements From Public Listed Companies in an easily searchable online database and made available for the worldwide and nationwide investing public who missed reading or seeing the notices from Public Companies published in various daily newspapers. This website provides access to active & archived notices of Financial Statements( Quately, Half- Yearly, Annually), Balance Sheet/ AGM, EGM/ Divident Payments/ Book Closures/ Prospectuses

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The Security Commision requires public companies to disclose meaningful financial and other information to the world-wide and nationwide investing public. This provides a public source for all investors to use to judge for themselves if a company's securities are a good investment.

A Publicly Listed Company does not just advertise it's financial results for the sake of advertising in the newspapers. It is duty bound to disclose this information to the world-wide investing public.

It is practically impossible for the investing public to see the Notice Advertisements From Publicly Listed Companies published in various daily, weekly and monthly newspapers. There are many major news papers being published which carry a substantial amount of Notice Advertisements From Publicly Listed Companies. Even if one procures all the newspapers on a regular basis, one may not be able to ensure that he/she has seen all the Notices From Publicly Listed Companies. These notice include: Financial Statements( Quaterly, Half- Yearly and Annually), Balance Sheets, AGM, EGM , Divident Payments,  Book Closures, Prospectuses and Company news.

BENEFITS OF PUBLISHING NOTICES ONLINE

Research shows publicly listed companies have been paying for very expensive advertising to publish their Financial Statements, etc in newspapers for the nationwide public who probably never see these very important notices.

Many notice ads appear in a single issue of a newspaper and the potential for any one notice Ad to capture reader's attention is minimal. The readers may not read the section in which the advertisement appears or readers may simply have skipped the page because it contained little or nothing else of their interest.

In view of the above difficulty, an Enterprise has undertaken this online commerce project to compile all the Notice Advertisements from Publicly Listed Companies in an easily searchable online database. This database will be made available for the worldwide and nationwide investing public who may have missed reading or seeing the notices from Public Companies published in various daily newspapers.

This website provides access to active & archived notices of Financial Statements( Quaterly, Half-Yearly, Annually), Balance Sheet, AGM, EGM, Divident Payments, Book Closures and Prospectuses

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