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Is this a pome, poem, or cherry cheesecake?

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Cobbles, conks. Away...away!

Wall. Pebbles. Air.

Fire answers fire.

Scream convulsed caution.

Deaf. Dumb. Loudly mute.

Breathe fire, attain godhood.

Battle. Swords rinsed of mud.

Widows many. Life.

The dead have tongues of fire.

When will we all meet again...

Beware. Suffer night to alarm.

Fire...

Best of servants...but...

What a master....

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  1. Sound like a spell of sorts to me. Hrrrrmmm!


  2. When will man ever learn?  Notice, I wrote man.

  3. I so get this in part, but it must be something like lesson no. 42 in Conversational Martian. (I only got up to lesson 3 and got tossed from the class because I mispronounce Gazooiphoid, but that's beside the point)

    Free flowing dreamlike,nightmarish, figurative gibberosity that pome-ically disguises itself very well as a Cherry on top of the Cheesecake. Enigmata Hari! (meaning "I spy a genius among us" or a mongoose if you prefer) Quite spoodlish Elys !

  4. Ancient, eternal, futurisitc, and unforgettable. Love it. Beautiful and profound.

    Widows many - The dead have tongues of fire. Wow. And pretty much in the center. Excellent....

    I think of lots of things here and, dragons.

  5. gobble gobble crickets and spit

    rocks of fire

    where dead vikings grow

    protecting us

    row by row

    Good one Elys....

    ,,,I can visualize the drama...

  6. I vote for cherry cheesecake

  7. It's a sweet poem...!!

  8. You did it again!! "The dead have tongues of fire." It is certainly not a pome, nor is it cherry cheesecake.  That leaves only poem.

  9. I can say this is not cheesecake, and not a morn in poem! Now that you mentioned cheesecake got the yearning!

  10. A mythical creature or using evil to win and in the end facing evil for eternity.  This is not cheesecake!  I will need to ponder more.

  11. predictions of the past:

    cloning  yesterday will result in .. back drafts!

    Your poem is no cheesecake not is it a pome. I believe it is a prediction and a warning. Thats my take. Every word is a chant!

  12. When you mix classic verse with cheescake, you get Poe Yumm ;¬)

  13. Try to make the message of your poem more clear.

  14. I have to say, I do not always hear your message, But I do

    enjoy a good slice of cherry cheese cake, yummy.

  15. I love cherry cheese cake and your poem.

  16. Food for the mind not the belly. Well done noble one, may the dark elf deliver hot coffee to your dream world.

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