Is this a problem that might hinder my story?

Question

my new fantasy series takes place in an orphanage called camfur ..i treat the orphanage as a magical orphanage with secrets to unravel....and still keep the main growing tension between the boys and girls inside(young adult seems),a totaly different type of orphanages..but i'm afraid people will hate it .....and feel unrelatable to such place but then i remember fablehaven(a preserve isn't a relatable place and charlie's factory)what do u think guys....should i forgot about it and go on with my world and it'll evolve to life on its own?give me plz encouragement

Answer 1

Have you read the thief lord?

two young "new" orphans ran away from their wicked aunt's to VENICE where they meet a thief and start helping to live and then find an old magic carousel that makes them younger or older...

yeah... there's nothing much you can realate to that and it is a best seller and a wonderful book..

sometimes it's nice to be able to relate to characters in the book.. but it's also nice to discover new characters and worlds and realms and stuff you could never imagine...

so i say keep going.. write it.. do it.. at least just do it for you.. and then the rest wil follow..

Answer 2

i think you should give it ago you never know it might turn out to be a major book but if it doesn't seem right to you don't its what you feel that matters not us

Answer 3

Um, that wasn't very detailed, but I think you should write it. Give it your all :) what are the secrets? and how do they effect the children in it...?