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Is this an ODDquain??

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lost

thoughts jaded

perception tainted

can't see beyond what is felt

love

.....fine line.....

hate

toughts jaded

perception tainted

can't see beyond what is felt

lost

Temari

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  1. I don't know what you would classify it as, but I like it...jaded thoughts, tainted perception...this would blind ones sight to what is beyond. Thanks for sharing. Namaste


  2. Good form and idea! I like the transformation between the two verses with matching interiors.
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