Is this an impressive CV for a 15 year old?

Question

John Doe

1234 Street Name, City, Province

Home: [phone]

Cell : [phone]

Email: [e-mail]

Personal Profile

I am 15 years old and very hard working. I am reliable and patient. Also, I work well in a team.

Education

High School, City, Province - (2004 – present)

• I take enriched English, French, Math and Physical science classes.

Achievements

• Exceptional Merit Roll (90% overall average)

• Honour Roll (80% overall average) (2004 – present)

• Various awards for high merit in my Spanish, Music and Math classes.

Work Experience

• Camp Counselor

Summer of 2005, 2006

Cambridge Respite Service

 Interacted with campers who had mental disabilities

 Worked in a team to organize and run different camp activities and events.

Volunteer Experience

I volunteer at many different organizations, such as:

-I LIST THEM

Interests / Activities

• Socializing/ working with others

• Playing Music

• Art

References available upon request

Answer 1

good except that last sentence in your personal profile...as pointed out earlier.  I also wonder how you are 15 and have taken 4 years of high school...huh???  

It says 2004-present (which is 08)

Answer 2

This sounds really good, and quite impressive.

However I would change one thing: Under 'Personal Profile' I would change the line "Also, I work well in a team." to "I also work well with others, in a team environment"