The paper is on how the freedoms of the people Fahrenheit 451 are restricted and what things led to it. Is this an okay introduction for a A level Freshman paper? I'm kind of worried my thesis is run on and unclear. any suggestions and critique is welcome!
“My uncle drove slowly on a highway once. He drove 40 miles per hour and was jailed for two days. Isn’t that funny, and sad too?†(Bradbury 9). Clarisse’s bizarre uncle is a prime example of how the citizens of the futuristic city in Fahrenheit 451 have extremely limited freedoms. In Fahrenheit 451 by Ray Bradbury, Guy Montag lives in this society with a lack of human freedoms accomplished by the pathetic education system, the people’s obsession with entertainment and escapism, and how intellectualism is frowned upon; all helping to take away the 3 things that people need to have freedom of mind.
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