This form just started creating itself as I was writing...could it be original and, if so, is it any good? Critiques are most welcome.
PreK
Although his wings were not yet dry
were not yet dry that day
that day she always knew he'd fly
he'd fly away some day
So, from her nest she gave a nudge
a nudge to help him fly
To help him fly among the stars
the stars that are so high
At first he flew, he flew so high
so high her heart did yearn
did yearn of all he'd come to know
to know and come to learn
The baby bird then left his nest
his nest to stretch his wings
his wings were wet, but off he flew
he flew to newer things
But, then his fledgling wings did pause
did pause within mid air
within midair he shed a tear
a tear of great despair
He feared that if he flew too high
too high he might get tossed
get tossed into a scary world
a scary world be lost
His mournful pleas have touched her heart
her heart did break that day
that day she sent her little bird
her little bird away
Then mother bird with heavy heart
with heavy heart she'd sing
she'd sing of how her little chick
her little chick did cling
And, how she knew of what was best
was best to help him grow
to help him grow and set his mind
and set his mind aglow.
So, with her strength, he'll find his place
his place among the stars
the stars where dreams are born to live
to live within our hearts.
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