Is this better? (for the back of the books summery question I asked a lil bit ago)?

Question

For sixteen-year-old Abby Johnson it started with a simple stolen ring – something that truly meant nothing. But it turns into something that could easily cost her, her life.

Feelings were revealed. Hearts were shattered. Past were relived. Friends were betrayed. Futures were altered.

And someone must die.

It's probably overly dramatic a little bit, but it's the second one I've writen. It's stil probably kind of bad, but would you read a book off of that?

Answer 1

I like it, it got me curious.

We (people) don't want to read something normal. What is the point of reading a story if it is boring and something your next door neighbor could tell you? We like things to be dramatic and packed full of things to broaden the mind and our knowledge.