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Is this form familiar?

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"Discovery" - rondel

In the darkness surroudning, eclipsing my dream,

I see your eyes shining, ascending from night,

the scars of the battle, victor in the fight.

I cannot escape the intent of their gleam.

The words of once lovers now turn to a scream,

and visions of rapture now poison my sight.

In the darkness surrounding, eclipsing my dream,

I see your eyes shining, ascending from night.

Slipping and falling in time's fatal stream,

the curse of your kiss is my forever blight;

there is but your blackness erasing my light,

and I find that you, dear, are not what you seem

in the darkness surrounding, eclipsing my dream.

Information on the Rondel - http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/rondel.html

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  1. "Hi!",

    "Wow, that is impressive. I have never seen or done one of these before".

    WELL DONE!

    Cheers : )


  2. This one made my neck loose, causing my head to go "Bong! Bong! Bong!"

    Quite the reaction, I think.

    THIS, may be my favorite of yours.

  3. I don't care if our Captain calls me a "reactionary." I am enamored of classical forms--and the way you do them.
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